Feedback about 'Rough-cut'

After showing our teacher our  rough overall she was very pleased as she said it had a 'charm' to it. However, there were still areas where we could improve for example our teacher noticed a jump-cut that was unnecessary. She also told us that the lighting we used for a scene was very creative and hard to do which pleased us. As we re-shot all of the ending of our clip she saw a rough copy of our finished piece but we need to add the shots that we re-filmed.